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By (user no longer on site) OP
over a year ago
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Could you lovely people take a quick look at my profile,and give me any pointers please.constructive criticism welcome,just please don't be to nasty.thank you in advance.
Dave.  |
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By (user no longer on site)
over a year ago
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Break it up into paragraphs, it's not easy to read the way it is.
And take out the stuff at the end about timewasters - it won't make people think "Oooh I'll not waste his time then" it just makes you look negative. |
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